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okwell

the reason why u have a DJ is because u are not a DJ...

Try making tracks from NOTHING instead of riping off MIDI files. Yes we know you 'edit' them (tbh you just do them a serious injustice) but that does not change the fact that u pretty much didnt actually input a single note to the whole song.

Next time you thing of 'remixing' a track, STOP. Start a track fresh, thing of a beat, add it, next, thing of a bassline, add that, and btw dont do this all at once, like in the same 2hr period, leave it a few days, actually spend more than a couple of hours on a song.

Once you have the core beat/bass down, thing of SCTRUCTURE. Try to make an intro, verse/chorus/breakdown style of structure, rather than just - no kick - kick- actually use build ups/breakdown.

Im noy saying this in a condacending manner, im just trying to help u build a track - altho a lot of the songs i have uploaded on this site could use a lot of work, i am actually musician in real life, play guitar, piano and drums and i have played in a band for quite some time playing locally, and when u actually have the pressure of performing on the fly, u will learn to pace urself and practice and learn from mistakes, rather than just repeat everything.

To some it all up... Make your own UNIQUE track, by unique i mean all of the notes not just instrumentation, and get some people u know to rate it, tell them to be honest, then upload it on here. Dont be too hasty to upload shit, since u do have a lot of the same thing on here, some ok some not so.

Well thats my honest opinion.

Much love :)

Al

BowserThedestructive responds:

Well the fact is is this one issucky but i dont make for pecific people...
And i am not hasty at uploading.the key to what i do on newgrounds is orchestrate songs has no remixing no adding notes i purely DO justice to the song has in 1 day or mores work.. Your looking at my olds files so you fail a bit =D i wasnt had good nor am i now but i was wen this was made.

well shag!

if kirsty and bruno had a shag song, this would be it!

...

this is the least drum and bass sounding track ive ever heard...

BowserThedestructive responds:

hehe >:I

no sire

ok sire

BowserThedestructive responds:

made for some dude so I dont care what you say :D..

i agree with jakehoshgothen

he was right its madly poo. i ate soem roten chadder once and it smelt bad but this is smelly more ok rly pongs tempo keeps going offtime liek anewb alory dalana now panty botum poo

aha thelon misure

valan doth rage

demoralising shout
battle shout
hamstring
pawnagee
mortal striku
pawnagii
konichewa
thunderclap
comanding shout
frostbolt
firebolt
fireblast
eggpun
fartbutox
do you yes sire.
ok thanks cool
no its not cool moron
ok chill man
ok ffs ............cough noob cough
omg lol your such a panter pong
ok be liek that no loving for you tonight sire
ok pedowong
ilove you sire
me to fanny
chader
boose
firepoo
kaka wee
muku wah wah
lol

lol

lol

lol

omg lol
he was right its madly poo. i ate soem roten chadder once and it smelt bad but this is smelly more ok rly pongs tempo keeps going offtime liek anewb alory dalana now panty botum poo

aha thelon misure

valan doth rage

demoralising shout
battle shout
hamstring
pawnagee
mortal striku
pawnagii
konichewa
thunderclap
comanding shout
frostbolt
firebolt
fireblast
eggpun
fartbutox
do you yes sire.
ok thanks cool
no its not cool moron
ok chill man
ok ffs ............cough noob cough
omg lol your such a panter pong
ok be liek that no loving for you tonight sire
ok pedowong
ilove you sire
me to fanny
chader
boose
firepoo
kaka wee
muku wah wah
lol

lol

lol

lol

omg lol
he was right its madly poo. i ate soem roten chadder once and it smelt bad but this is smelly more ok rly pongs tempo keeps going offtime liek anewb alory dalana now panty botum poo

aha thelon misure

valan doth rage

demoralising shout
battle shout
hamstring
pawnagee
mortal striku
pawnagii
konichewa
thunderclap
comanding shout
frostbolt
firebolt
fireblast
eggpun
fartbutox
do you yes sire.
ok thanks cool
no its not cool moron
ok chill man
ok ffs ............cough noob cough
omg lol your such a panter pong
ok be liek that no loving for you tonight sire
ok pedowong
ilove you sire
me to fanny
chader
boose
firepoo
kaka wee
muku wah wah
lol

lol

lol

lol

omg lol

he was right its madly poo. i ate soem roten chadder once and it smelt bad but this is smelly more ok rly pongs tempo keeps going offtime liek anewb alory dalana now panty botum poo

aha thelon misure

valan doth rage

demoralising shout
battle shout
hamstring
pawnagee
mortal striku
pawnagii
konichewa
thunderclap
comanding shout
frostbolt
firebolt
fireblast
eggpun
fartbutox
do you yes sire.
ok thanks cool
no its not cool moron
ok chill man
ok ffs ............cough noob cough
omg lol your such a panter pong
ok be liek that no loving for you tonight sire
ok pedowong
ilove you sire
me to fanny
chader
boose
firepoo
kaka wee
muku wah wah
lol

lol

lol

lol

omg lol
he was right its madly poo. i ate soem roten chadder once and it smelt bad but this is smelly more ok rly pongs tempo keeps going offtime liek anewb alory dalana now panty botum poo

aha thelon misure

valan doth rage

demoralising shout
battle shout
hamstring
pawnagee
mortal striku
pawnagii
konichewa
thunderclap
comanding shout
frostbolt
firebolt
fireblast
eggpun
fartbutox
do you yes sire.
ok thanks cool
no its not cool moron
ok chill man
ok ffs ............cough noob cough
omg lol your such a panter pong
ok be liek that no loving for you tonight sire
ok pedowong
ilove you sire
me to fanny
chader
boose
firepoo
kaka wee
muku wah wah
lol

lol

lol

lol

omg lol

wHoa

the title owns.

BowserThedestructive responds:

Your nice here then a bitch on anotha o_0 Sorry for latest review i gave you then meh :(

Wicked

Very edgy, just like you said in your description.

AVOID TEH MUMMY LAZ0R EYEZ11!23

:D

Like it!

P-W-N-A-G-E

!!!!!!!

omg this is wicked!

Sounds just like it but better imo.

awesome

psy-trance is teh sex, you are teh sex xD

PERVOK responds:

Yeah, sex :D

I am me, yes!

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